Looking back at my footage

I am pleased with the content but the shots are fuzzy and often wobbly. My first draft the shots lasted too long, i'm very glad i took so many takes and in so many different ways as a large percentage of my recordings were unusable. I am also glad I avoided dialogue, it's not required in the first 2 minutes of a film and it would have been very hard to make it sound authentic and believable. In many of the AS films I have seen the speech was awkward and clunky.