Analysis of text examples

I think the first piece of text a mid level 3. I think the contents page is poor, the text doesn't stand out and the picture background is blurry and seemingly bears no relevance to the text. I like the image on the front cover but again the price blends in with background. The photoshopping of the girl on the double page spread show good use of IT. THe use of language is not accurate with both grammatical and spelling errors

The second piece is terrible level 1 or 2, the text isnt clear and on the double page spread overlaps slightly onto the next page making it very hard to read. The white background look unprofessional. There are several examples of blurred images, also the repeated use of exclamation marks I find lowers the tone of the magazine.